Tell me what you guys think. It’s for Comp.

People stare as you go by
You’re much more popular than I
Your taste on my lips
Matches your edges and tips
The display of golden color
Is highlighted with cheesy humor
I could never let you go
Hungered more than you know
Making my stomach tickle in pleasure
I savor our time together
You just put me at ease
I love you, grilled cheese

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